6 Comments
User's avatar
Carla Main's avatar

"Salt air memory" Oh, thank you for that! ( I have so many salt-air memories, from so long ago.)

Expand full comment
Suzanna de Baca's avatar

Love the twist at the end.

Expand full comment
Chris Offutt's avatar

Another good one. Great ending.

Expand full comment
Dean Draznin's avatar

Reminds me of one of my favorite books, Zen Flesh Zen Bones, by Paul Reps. The closing line has the flavor of a Zen teaching. It takes you out of the preceding flow and makes your mind jump to a new place. Transcendental.

Expand full comment
Michael Judge's avatar

Arigato.

Expand full comment
Dean Draznin's avatar

De nada.

Expand full comment